Friday, September 17, 2010

Haiku my heart: A Cripple Fantasy

Painting by Jim Mc Dermott

As if from nowhere - silently
you came - and you stood by me
a cripple fantasy

Riette

10 comments:

Anonymous said...

This is conceptually fascinating. Thanks.

All the best, Boonie

Meri said...

Such a unique image and haiku. Great contribution!

Noelle Clearwater said...

This is deeply moving Riette. It reminds me of Victor Hugo's the Hunchback of Notre Dame, that profound story of a holy and unique soul who experienced such abuse and marginalization at the hands of his fellow man and yet was able to love so full-heartedly and so compassionately his Esmerelda. His words, "She gave me water" still echo in my ears. I am wondering if this is a shadow or archetypal figure for you. It is a beautiful haiku and a great contribution. Thank you.
Noelle

Spadoman said...

I couldn't say what Noelle said as gracefully, but that is what I thought too, it is the hunchback, and he did love so unconditionally in spite of his fate.
Wonderful stuff!

Peace.

Marilyn & Jeff said...

Thought provoking, how many of us have one of these.
Thanks for visiting my blog.

paper-n-soul said...

There is such beauty and poignancy in this image and verse. Thank you for posting.

~Deb

rebecca said...

yes...this took me immediately back to a childhood memory of the original black and white version of the hunchback of notre dame. i was young and completely swept away. such a testimony of compassion and non judgement.
thank you for this.

ms pie said...

a cripple's love is often hard to come by... we look and b/c of the imperfection we pass by... one has to have a tender heart beyond the facade of our eyes to possess a love such as you speak... beautiful beautiful beautiful.... i can only think of elephant man... imagine he wore a cloth over his head to walk outside... ouch! haiku my heart

Vinay Leo R. said...

a thought provoking and different take :)

Haiku My Heart

EG CameraGirl said...

That's an interesting and moving interpretaion of the painting.

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