My fingers through your hair
your face cupped in my hands
Just one night - with you
Riette 20 Nov 2010
recuerda mi corazon
Saturday, November 20, 2010
Haiku my heart: Just one night
My fingers through your hair
your face cupped in my hands
Just one night - with you
Riette 20 Nov 2010
recuerda mi corazon
11 comments:
riveting. seductive. impetuous. stunning.
all this and more in a slender haiku!
Hot and romantic.
Have a great weekend !
Grrrr..... Grrrreat.
Have a nice day, Boonie
Thank you Rebecca, Kim and Boonie for your inspiring comments. I do wish I could play with the English language the way you do . . .
Another one struck by Cupid!! My entry here "The Strike" is on Cupid who i see is having a good time here too :) Have a great weekend!!
Nanka, every post is inspired by someone or something, don't you think? Hope you have a great weekend too
Such an evocative photo and evocative words.
her body cups his
as if perfectly aligned
hearts, minds and spirits
breathless....WOW! Hot...sizzle...
Ah Riette, it is a lovely photo, so deeply and passionately romantic and I am trying to see if it is Italian or French. It looks like a Doisneau? Your haiku is poetic and very evocative. I love it. I just adore black and whites. I think they speak volumes more than color photos when it comes to passion and romance.
xoxo,
Noelle
I had to look up the meaning of the word "evocative"
evoca·tive (ē väk′ə tiv, i-)
adjective
1. tending to evoke a reaction or response, esp. an emotional one
2. vivid and seemingly realistic as in the artistic representation of a particular time, place, etc.
Yes, the photo has indeed evoked reaction, emotional one.
Thank you Meri. you have responded with another perfect haiku.
Noelle, it took me quite some time to find the perfect photo and I found it! And unknowingly I chose a B&W photo which you have just pointed out as to why I did it.
Deb did it, breathless indeed!
Thank you all for your reaction
so romantic. the image is just perfect. thank you for stopping by my blog. cheers
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